ael
Okay, @cstsai and I finally finished the draft of the English article on Disfactory for Common Wealth Magazine.
Help needed:
1. Title brainstorming and voting
2. Copy editing
3. Nice photos and diagrams for the article @cstsai @oriyaroriyar. I highlighted the part needing a photo in yellow.
And any other suggestions are welcomed <3
https://g0v.hackmd.io/quqiOa5LSu-amjxav_EP8Q?both
Help needed:
1. Title brainstorming and voting
2. Copy editing
3. Nice photos and diagrams for the article @cstsai @oriyaroriyar. I highlighted the part needing a photo in yellow.
And any other suggestions are welcomed <3
https://g0v.hackmd.io/quqiOa5LSu-amjxav_EP8Q?both
g0v.hackmd.io
Disfactory English article on CommonWealth Magazine - HackMD
ael
@sandrahtlin @caleb @liu.brandon
caleb
yosssss
caleb
due by when? I'm in tainan this weekend
ael
It is supposed to be in the monthly column for April, but the editor doesn’t give any strict deadline. I think it is quite flexible because it is just an online column
ael
@calebBTW, @cstsai said he was quite impressed that you totally got what we are doing while you only come twice so far.
caleb
Haha do I? Thanks lol glad I hit the mark
caleb
Maybe that's why I was so attracted to this project
caleb
Ok I will take a look at the article tomorrow for some copy editing
caleb
when i make blanket changes, you can see and revert them if you disagree, right?
caleb
i'm worried if i'm blowing away someone else's work
deeper
About the diagram kind of hard to decide how would be clearer for the reader, need help!
https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1Ri0regSUG24nLPG6MZEIAA3GkGcfxvfh_aURV5vHkxY/edit?usp=sharing
https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1Ri0regSUG24nLPG6MZEIAA3GkGcfxvfh_aURV5vHkxY/edit?usp=sharing
deeper
遇到的問題
1.要用實照嗎？
2.三步驟對民眾是a.拍照、b.標記、c.上傳，還是要a.拍照、b.標記上傳、c.CET幫檢舉
3.一些排版、挑插畫抉擇兩難XD
1.要用實照嗎？
2.三步驟對民眾是a.拍照、b.標記、c.上傳，還是要a.拍照、b.標記上傳、c.CET幫檢舉
3.一些排版、挑插畫抉擇兩難XD
deeper
@wutingy @sandrahtlin
ael
I like the first on lol
1. I think photos are better than illustration
2. I think it is important to put CET reports in the loop
1. I think photos are better than illustration
2. I think it is important to put CET reports in the loop
caleb
Ok! Lemme take a look in about an hour
ael
Or we should state as how Disfactory works
caleb
what's the objective?
caleb
a full on instructional or just like, demonstrate how easy disfactory is to use?
caleb
also, in terms of text placement, immediatley under the numbers makes the most sense to me. As for bolding or not, I don't think it really matters, but i lean torwards no bolding
ael
to visualize the report flow process
caleb
hmm. when you say that, it makes me think more about what happens *after* i use disfactory to report a factor, i.e., CET files the report, it gets looked at by some beaurucrat, eventually the cops go to the factory and start getting a little mao zedong on the landowner
ael
What? what is little mao zedong ?
caleb
> The *Chinese Land Reform Movement*, also known by the Chinese abbreviation *Tǔgǎi* (土改), was a campaign by the Communist Party leader Mao Zedong during the late phase of the Chinese Civil War and the early People's Republic of China.[1] The campaign involved mass murder of landlords by tenants and land redistribution to the peasantry.[
caleb
just a joke
caleb
like the cops tear shit down
caleb
some of my leftist friends will joke about going Mao on their landlord if they increase rent too much or something
ael
take a photo-> mark the location on Disfactory-> CET files the report after review -> government sends someone over and reply to CET whether or not the building is under illegal usage and thier next actions-> CET update the status on Disfactory and call the government agency if they find the government are making excuses. The reports are also used as statistics in press release, public hearings, and closed door meetings to pressure the government on the issue.
caleb
why did that promipt a card captor sakura
ael
because the word r e l e a s e
deeper
Release in name of Caleb
ael
@caleb It is totally not an appropriate joke for me. Many people died in Tǔgǎi (土改) because the authority encouraged “the peasants” to start the class warfare against the landlord as far as to kill them.
We are NOT targeting any individuals, neither the landlords nor the factory owners. We are NOT trying to make them as enemy deserve to be beaten to death or derive their property right.
We are NOT targeting any individuals, neither the landlords nor the factory owners. We are NOT trying to make them as enemy deserve to be beaten to death or derive their property right.
caleb
ok ok lol sorry
caleb
i didn't mean to imply that
caleb
that corresponds with typical usage i.e. it falls into a class of hyperbole.
caleb
but i'll bear it in mind considering that some taiwanese are descendants of people that fled the land reform movement 👀
caleb
> take a photo-> mark the location on Disfactory-> CET files the report after review -> government sends someone over and reply to CET whether or not the building is under illegal usage and thier next actions-> CET update the status on Disfactory and call the government agency if they find the government are making excuses. The reports are also used as statistics in press release, public hearings, and closed door meetings to pressure the government on the issue.
is this what we want to focus on in the visualization then? cause we only talk about uploading a pic etc
is this what we want to focus on in the visualization then? cause we only talk about uploading a pic etc
ael
No, that’s not because of my ancestors, who actually had nothing to do with the Land Reform in China at that time. It is like joking to do a little bit Nazi in a community project in any non-white neighborhood.
caleb
Ok, I hear you and apologize
ael
Anyway, back to the diagram. I wrote out the whole process, but I think a simplified version is better. That will be @cstsai’s decision on which key steps to illustrate for readers.
caleb
well if it's from a user's perspective i again bounce back to the idea of really they only do 2 things
caleb
or maybe 3 insomuch as they take a pic, put a pin on the map, and then presumably fill out some information, then submit
ael
@caleb Thank you for your copy editing and many great suggestions on the article! FTI, We now want to lock the copy editing unless there are obvious grammar and spelling mistakes. (Thank you again on all editing) The rest of the work now is to get the diagrams and photos right
caleb
oh ok
caleb
i'll check again later for any grammar issues
caleb
is it difficult to revert any changes i made? sorry abou tthat
ael
@caleb BTW, did you already add i18n on Disfactory.tw? I am not sure if it is merged
caleb
Oh haha wow aaah no unfortunately I actually forgot about that ticket 😅
caleb
I haven't had the time I want to have on contributing sadly
caleb
I would love to take that task on though
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